When you told me the news I freaked and screamed There was just no use in calming me down Maybe you didn't see it but inside that's what was going down I thought we had something special but now as I look back it's not as special as I thought now I'm on my own facing the world without you by my side and I'm not going to lie I'm kind of scared but hey it's cool I've moved on Let things go Figured out I'm better than this I'm not gonna cry my eyes out over you I'm gonna sing out loud when I wann and do what I wann cause this situation I've been put in is not that bad after all No it's not that bad after all
Written: May 27, 2010
Monday, June 14, 2010
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hmmm... I think you can bring out the emotions in this a bit more... and maybe use the 'news' idea a bit more... maybe say you were black and white like the morning paper... and the black ink was smuding all over you from the rain on that day... but now you're starting to animate again and see more color spectrum as the sun comes out and dries your tears c:
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